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One-Sentence Poems

The students were challenged to write one-sentence poems that captured an image. The first two lines and the first line of the third line were the same in each poem--that made the pattern. What finishes the pattern is different in each poem. These are easy to write and can be fun--you try it! Maybe yours will be more vivid and descriptive!

Here are the students' poems so far--more will be posted later.
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The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was a puppy
with very long hanging ears
and a dark brown color.

--Samone

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was a cascade
clear water,
falling down from a mountain.

--Rowel

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was a sunset
closing down in the ground
and night fun following behind it.
--Charleston

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was the stars
reflecting from the water
and the moon
brightening the long water streams.
--Destiny

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was a butterfly
so cute and cuddly,
it made my smile
shine like the sun.

--Mariah

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was a rainbow
with mouth-watering colors,
a popsicle in the sky.

--Danesha

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was a huge constellation hidden
beyond the wonderful stars
and their exquisite white glare.

--Chris

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was a waterfall
thrashing on the rocks
and splashing into a lake.

--Lauren

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was the white fluffy snow
in the city
of New Orleans.
--Bonita

The most beautiful thing
I’ve ever seen
was my kindful loving mother
on her wedding day
when she walked
down the long, wide aisle.

 James J.

The most beautiful thing
I”ve ever seen
was a waterfall
connected to a
big stream.
--Myia

Comments

Samone,
You made me smile because you described, in a sentence, our beloved bassett hound, Rexford. P. Hound-Dog, better known as Rexie-Boy. My son named him for Tyranasaurus Rex! He was a loving and wonderful, long-eared pooch. We miss his sad droopy eyes and sweet disposition. He passed away in 2003. Thanks for renewing the fond memory of Rexie as a pup!

Ms. Maddox,
You have wonderfully talented poets; these poems touched my heart and soul.

Chris, that was a lovely way to explain the beauty in constellations.

FANTASTIC JOB!!!! TO HENDERSON MIDDLE SCHOOL STUDENTS!!

Chris, that was a lovely way to explain the beauty in constellations.

I love the one about the puppy sooooo cute!!!! and the others too!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved the puppy one!!

I liked the one about the sunset because i go to the cape a lot and see the sunset on the beach!

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