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PRAYERS OF THE ANIMALS

THE PRAYER OF A CAT

Dear Lord
I am a nice loving cat.
That likes to sit in my owners lap.
But when I sneak outside lord.
Please don’t let the tick magnet run me up a tree.
So my owner has to call the fire department.
You see.

BY: Destiny Alexander

The Prayer Of The Horse

Dear Lord,
Give me the strength I need
To run this race
I’m the slowest of them all
My hair is a mess,
My shoes are rough and need cleaning,
I’m starved all the time
Because I don’t win races,
My skin is rough
And I need a bath,
Lord please help me

Amen

By: Samone Holland

“The Prayer Of A Dog”

Dear God,
I Know You’re Good,
I Know You Hear Me,
And You Understand Me.

I Want Somebody To Love Me,
And Someone Who Take Care Of Me,
That Person Will Be From You,
And That Person Will Be Like You.

I Don’t Want Be Alone,
I Want Be Happy In A Home,
I Just Want To Be Happy,
Happy With A Family.

Thanks For Your Time God,
Thanks For Being Good,
Thanks For The Person,
That Will Come Soon.
Amen.

By Rowel Tun Leon


Comments

Dear Samone Holland,
I like your poem "The Prayer of the Horse." It is insightful, showing the pleads of an ever-losing horse. I have a friend who loves horses, and I'll have to show this to her because I know she'll like it. However, in the sixth-eigth lines-
"My shoes are rough and need cleaning,
I’m starved all the time
Because I don’t win races,"
It isn't clear whether the "I" is starved all the time because it doesn't win races or because of its shoes. Great poem, though. Keep writing!

Sincerely,
Bookwormie, SMS1

yo this is aswone

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