Real Friends
REAL FRIENDS
Is a real friend the one who
cares about you
who says good things
about you
Is a real friend the one
who stays by your side
Through thick and thin now
That’s what you call
Real friends
---by Russell
Comments
LOve this POem thats what a best friends is someone who stays by your side
Posted by: CAitlIN | May 14, 2007 11:28 AM
i like this poem because it has good descriptive words that describe a best friend. something i think that you should work on is your sentense openers, good job though :D
Posted by: Myles | May 19, 2007 11:14 PM
I can't think of a better subject to write about than friends.
Posted by: Brooke from St. Johns | May 22, 2007 1:38 AM
I really enjoyed this poem, it really tells you what a real friend is. I think you could've added some more words in your poem and make it longer but still it was good!! Good Job
Posted by: Jasmine BONNER | May 23, 2007 1:57 PM
Dear Russell,
I really like your poem, "Real Friends." It is very meaningful and deep. That's what I think a real friends is too, and that's who I try to be. It is simple, but that's okay because it has a great meaning to it!
Sincerely,
n1ii3k sms1
Posted by: n1ii3k | June 5, 2007 4:00 PM
I like the way you wrote your poem and the description of what a true friend means to you. Very thoughtful.
Posted by: Ryan W. St. John's | June 10, 2007 9:18 PM
Great poem Russell! I realy liked the choice of words.
Posted by: Max W. | June 11, 2007 9:48 AM