October 16, 2007

Group writing The assignment:
Write down one phrase that describes an observation made between awakening this morning and arriving at school. Remember this is a phrase! I don't want you to write "I observed a bird flying." but "a bird flying" Think to yourself, "I saw, heard, smelled, tasted felt..." and then write the phrase. Here is your combined responses!

The Beginning of the Day

The alarm clock buzzes in my ear,
screaming next to my bed.
Maybe
I hear blaring music
Though sometimes I wake
To the sound of the TV show,
The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air

Waking up to the annoying red light
The blurry clock that said 5:00 a.m.
In the darkness of my room
with the light from the windows


Usually I see my cat
A big black cat at the end of my bed.
Or
The small kitten
That bit my nose
my cat pawing at my face
jumping straight at me

I heard my dog
Bella
Barking at the new day
tied outside and cuddled in a blanket

Dressing
Unheated air
freezing after hot shower water
the cold running through me
But finally I feel the warm air
lingering
in my newly heated room

Some days I taste Fruit-Loops or I enjoy
French toast with a waterfall of syrup

The bus is late
But finally I see it
big and yellow
rumbling its way down the road.

June 7, 2007

Summertime

The sun gleaming bright
The wind whisteling loudly
Summer’s on its way

MMFC24

June 6, 2007

Music Is Cool by MadHacker10

Music Is Cool
Rap?
Pretty Cool
Heavy Metal?
Ok
Pop?
Good
Country?
Bleah
Alternitive?
Great
Music?
My Life

After School On Ordinary Days

After School On Ordinary Days

After school on ordinary days I,
Take the bus home,
Waiting quietly at home,
Doing my homework,
Until my parents return from thier jobs,

The pantry's large wooden doors,
The many cabinets,
Surrounding me,
Having the occasional snack,
Shooting my pellet gun,

Eating dinner,
With the family,
Together,
Watching a movie on the large leather couch,
Together.

Found Poem By MadHacker10

Tucks voice was rough now,
And Winnie,
Amazed,
Sat rigid,d
I want to grow again,
I want to live again.
And if that means it has to end,
It’ll be a good ending.

Ode to Pizza Madhacker10

Ode To Pizza, Pizza, Pizza, Fill up your face,
Delicious, Cheesy, Meaty,
Deliciousness, Tasty,
Crunchy, Cheap,
Oily, Heavenly
Food God,
Yum

Haiku by ftbllkid77

Thunderous clouds come ever closer
slowly creeping upon us
No, no more baseball today

afreind is a friend-ftbllkid77

“A friend to all is a friend to none”-Aristotle

a friend is a friend
who looks out for others and is nice to all
a friend is someone who is a friend to all
but a friend to none
a friend is a friend
who stands up for others and listens to try and find the truth in others
Afreind to all is a friend to none

Plant Haiku

E-S@UC3 SMS1
Watering a plant
Water is overflowing
Destroying the plant

Parents Haiku

Adidas
Parents Haiku
Loving and caring,
They are always there, for you
Everywhere around.

tuck found poem By:Scrlax4682

Miles pushed the rowboat off,
and sprang in
soon they were
gliding up tward
the near end of the pond,
where the water came in,
flowing from the spring,
the locks grated
as the oars dipped and swung

Continue reading "tuck found poem By:Scrlax4682" »

After School on Ordinary Days

After school on ordinary days we talk about our ongoing day
As we ate our extra cheddar gold fish
That were always kept in the snack cabinet
Filled with all our needs and wants.
My mother was always home early from managing our dealership
by the time I walked in the door after school on ordinary days,
I would get my beyond freezing ice pack out.
The two of us would watch one tree hill, before I started to analyze my homework
Later
We’d have supper at the mahogany dinner table
The smells of the rich goodness of the fumes of food
Sprouting like glowers in the air.
After supper on ordinary days, We’d lay on the twin leather couches
My mom would make buttered popcorn
While I rest and let my mind wonder

By MMFC24

June 5, 2007

Haiku...Secrets123 SMS1

Cheering and Swimming
Those are my favorite things
Yelling and kicking

thank you

thank you to adidas
for your great comment.
And thanks to OliverBonner
for your wonderful compliment.
Thank you to n1ii3k
for your connectoins about my poem.
And thanks to jdizzle
for your comment.
Thank you to madhacker10
for your suggestion.
And thanks to Elise;;Bonner
for the soccer comments.
Thank you to bball21
for the pantoum comment.
And thank you to leah
for your compliment about music.
Thanks to lilpapigal
for letting me know what I did right.
And thanks to soccerking
for the ideas about green.
Thanks to marcy101
for a great comment.
Also, I especially want to thank
Bill and Keith Mack
for the amazing comments
and constructive criticism.
Thanks so much for all of the comments.

redsoxfan5

June 1, 2007

A Thank You To....

Aimlis for the comment on
Individuality
And Mr.Turtle for the inspiration
And encouraging words.

Then, there's Gem,
She always knows the patterns
And of course Alice Joey
Who is always remembering.

But don't forget Bookwormie
With her wonderful, detailed thoughts
And CrystalAnnie
Who offered her support.

Bball21,
He always has something nice to say.
And n1ii3k always finds an idea
That she can relate to.

Ftbllkid77 is kind
And optimistic
While C.M from Bonner
Learned something new.

Then Mrs.Famum, the one
Who likes the repetition

And last but not least,
Bill and Keith, the ones who put this together.
Thanks so much for this opportunity,
It was fun while it lasted.

------------------------------------
By Georgietta

Thank You....Secrets123.....SMS1

Dear Illusions,
Thank you for commenting my poem "Night" You really knew how this poem was layed out to be, because you felt the same impending doom I did when writing it. But you were reading it.
Also I would like to thank Alice Joey for commenting that same poem "Night" I think you felt the mystery that was also deep inside the lines of this poem that is exactly what I wanted readers to feel.
Impending doom, and mystery.
Also I would like to thank the whole team that made this poetry slam possible. Also thank you for including my class in this great oppurtunity and I hope that you keep us in mind for next year.

Sincerely, Secrets123 SMS1

Music Rocks

flowing into my unhearing ears
makes all teachers mad
unheard of unruly
we don't care
just as if they weren't there
we continue to ignore
they yell as if we can hear them
we don't want to hear
anything but the music
then the music stops
time for next class
until next time.

Baseball form

I thank you
ball for giving me
something to do all day
I use you everyday in one
way or another from shooting
hoops or scrolling with a mouse
the way you swish and whiz by
I sometimes see you flying sky
high you have many different
forms but the one I enjoy
you most is as the one
you are the most
baseball

Basketball

Dribbling dribbling all I want
not stopping for a moment to rest
moving moving non stop
never to quit never to sleep

not stopping for a moment to rest
missing trying again
never to quit never to sleep
running running falling get up

missing trying again
backboard rim in
running running falling get up
trying trying

dribbling dribbling all I want
backboard rim in
trying trying
moving moving non stop

Air haiku Aimilis

quietly I come
cool but sometimes warm against
your smooth yet tight skin

Ode To Me The Rock Aimilis

Sitting here alone
I have no emotions no love
I make my way sea to sea
classroom to classroom
all alone
starting as a boulder now down to a mere rock
shiny and green
worth millions to many
but to me i feel like nothing
I provide shelter
warmth and to some
even water.
So please dont forget me
dont step on me thinking
“oh it's just a rock”
you never know
that a rock has feelings
because we are solid stone
nothing more
no help
or am I?

Thank you for your marvelous comments on my in Maine Ive learned poem

thanks
redoxfan5
Secrets123
Madhacker10
Mr. Turtle
I thank you for your constructive critiscism
ALSO I thank you for encouriging me to continue writing
Once again I thank you for commenting me and helping me to better my self in the
poetry business.

I like how you guys talked about all that coukld be changed and you agreed with what was good in it.

Ode to life EL I Assume

Life is a wonderful gift
given to me I don't know why
but I will soon know.
I believe everyone has a purpose
otherwise why would there be life
someday I hope to be something special
let me think...
a basketball player
astronaut
EMT
or anything
I want to be
I could live the good old life
I could be a star
the one thing I know is that
it's not very far
what it is I don't know
I hope I have a good reason for living this life
but can someone please tell me why
you can be what you want to be
but be yourself
thats what I say
and that's my life.

Would you know me?

Would you know me if...
You met me on the streets of this large "small" world?

Would you know that I have many pets
4 cats, 1 dog, a 1 fish
Or that my music and sports are pretty much my life?
Would you know that I love to hang out with my friends?
To just goof off and be me, and not have to live up to anything
Not have to care what anyone thinks, just have fun with life

Would you know me?

Would you know me?

Thank you

Thank you all for giving me nice comments,
Goody thank you for the comments
Bill thank you for the nice comment about knowing me better.
Write Heart thank you for this comment I'm glad you like my poem.
Bookwormie thank you for your comment I'm glad it makes you laugh.
Kieth Mack thank you for your comment and i meant the music rock.
Thank You all for your great comments. Bball21 SMS1

Found Poem

Up through the dim pine trees they went,
The constable's breath wheezing in their ears,
And emerging from the coolness and the green,
Winnie saw again
The wide world spread before her
Shimmering with light and possibility,
But the possibilities were different now,
They did not point to what might happen to her
But what she, herself might keep from happening
For the only thing she could think about was the clear necessity.

By BaLLiN4LiF3

Ode to a Rock

Sitting there
like a man in a chair
staring up at me

The sun beaming down on you
The reflection so piercing
it hurts to look

It doesn't bother you though
You just keep staring at me
as if you were almost alive
just staring

By BaLLiN4LiF3 (SMS1)

A Thank You JO I assume

I thank you Bill,
for the tips,
about the rhyming.

Thank you Redsoxfan5,
for your ideas,
and letting my know
what I did correct.

Thank you Mrs A
For your comment
It was very informative.

Thanks By Starr.

TY
Thx.
Thanks.
Thank You.

Doesn't matter
How you say it.
But thank you
to everyone
who ever
commented
my poems.

Simple.
Thank You.
Complicated.
Thank you for using
Your creative side
of your head,
for recognizing
my genius
writing talents.

I'm on my way to
high school.
But I'll remember
all of you,
when I'm
Known all
over America.


So Thanks.

Love, Starr.


Thank You "WHO ARE YOU?"

Thank you Bettye
for your connection
And thank you Keith Mack
for the suggestions.

Thank you Bill and Jdizzle
for your perspective.
And thanks to Redsoxfan5
for your compliment.

B and nolisence,
thanks for the feedback.
Thank you Aimilis
for putting youself in my shoes.

Scrlax4682 thanks for your specifics.
thanks ftball 77 for your tips
Mr. Turtle thanks for your comment,
and Mrs. Famum and class thanks for the compliment!

Thank you to ballin4lif3
and everyone who took the time
to comment my poems.
Thank you.

May 31, 2007

Hockey

Hockey
By: Adidas

SMS1
In Hockey I've learned . . .
How to make friends,
That I will know to the end,
How to take actions for myself,
Sportsmanship on this big ice Shelf.

In Hockey I've learned . . .
That passing is the key to success,
It gives other players stress,
The flow of the game is key,
but winning is no guarantee.

In Hockey love Learn . . .
In this game there is Losers,
Only to the abusers,
Winners don't brag,
or else its a drag,

In Hockey Love Learned . . .
That having Fun is success,
But if you don't I'm not impress,
This is a game that you give a 110%,
Then you may get a present.
That is hockey.

Music is sweet

E-$@UC3 SMS1

I love music
Without it the world would be boring
No fun, nothing exciting
Music puts you in a mood
It makes you feel different emotions

Music is like a drug
Its almost addicting
How you get a song in your head and can't get it out
And once you hear it you sing out loud
Everything is good,
Except country and classical

Hip hop?
good rhyming nice beats
rap?
wicked fast, Busta Rhymes
Rock?
yeah, real instruments
Metal?
Slipknot, Can't understand it
Alternative?
Pretty sweet I guess
Country?
uhhhh NO
Classical?
For old people

Everyone likes music
Music is exciting
You never know what music will come out next

Mom

Mom
Mom it’s your special day
I love you a lot
You are the best
You’re always helpful

I love you a lot
We have fun with each other
You’re always helpful
We spend a lot of time together.

We have fun with each other
We play games.
We spend a lot of time together
Having fun.

We play games
Watching T.V. with you
Having fun
We will always be together.

Watching T.V. with you
We always do stuff together
We will always be together
Just you and me.
Bball21 SMS1

Aimilis

Would you know me if... you met me on
the street in this large “small world.
Would you notice me if I was me
or someone else. Would you
listen to me if I talked to
you in this large
“small”
world. I would
know you I would
see you I would listen
to you in this large yet
very “small” world.

Summer

I love summer
hot sunny friends no school
pool beach camp swimming
I love summer

By BaLLiN4LiF3

May 30, 2007

Alias

Ftbllkid77 by ftbllkid77

Would you know me if you saw me in this large small world?
Would you see that I love football?
Probably right cause that’s my screen name
But would you know that I play center on the football team.
Would you see in me a love of books, or would you see a jock
I am a little bit of both
I could be all
I could be nothing you might never know would you
So my question is…
Would you know me?

Music by ftbllkid77

Music

I love music.
Music is life.
Favorite song?
Thats a great question
but there are so many songs that I like.
If asked this question I would have
to say ooh ahh by Grits.
Rap... Great!
Rock... Awesome
Country...Ewwwwwww!
This is my fabulous opinion of music.

when i'm alone.

When I am alone,
I sit in deep thought
about how lucky I am to be alive
and that I am blessed.

My mind wonders from
school, to sports, to friends.
From college and my life ahead,
to what I am having for dinner.

I turn the music down low
and look out the window.
I gaze into and ponder about the mysterious world,
when I am alone.


n1ii3k. sms1

New Day

The wind whispers soft
The gleaming sun shines bright
The day is still young

MMFC24

Socrates by Georgietta

Small, furry, quiet
The rat scurries up the stairs
To hide in closets.

Dedicated to my rat who passed away almost a year ago.
RIP Socrates

Ode to an Elephant

Ode to an Elephant by ftbllkid77


Elegant,
this powerful beast,
Of pink fortitude,
sitting there,
patience beyond
the standards of anyone,
waiting emotionally strong.

But when asked
he will cry
and cry
and cry until told it was okey
to stop.

Waiting until next asked
a viscous circle but it is his job
and it is what he is good at.

The pink elephant watering can

May 29, 2007

Before the Concert

This is a model of The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe.
By Illusions


Once upon a midnight dreary, while I waited cold and weary,
Over a many shouts and bouts of laughter before
While I stood, nearly napping, suddenly there can a tapping
As of something angrily tapping, clapping on the floor
'Tis some soundcheck,' I muttered, 'tapping on the venue floor-
Only this, and nothing more.'

Ah, distinctly I remember, it was in the freezing December,
And each separate impatient fan brought their anticipation more.
Eagerly I thought no sorrow;-there were no tears left to borrow
From the sad mourners full of sorrow-sorrow for their hearts tore-
For the sanity and happiness that was unknowingly tore-
Nameless here for evermore.

And the frost falling uncertain from the sky's dark curtain
Thrilled me-filled me with such joys and excitement never felt before;
So that now, to calm my mind, I stood there repeating
''This some awkwardly broken instruments lying on the floor-
Some awkwardly broken instruments lying on the inside floor,-
This is it, and nothing more.'

Presently my soul grew stronger;having to wait no longer,
'Um,' said I, 'The reason for searching me I implore;
But the strange thing is there was a clapping, and so I came tapping,
And so loudly I heard sanpping, snapping of opening the door,
That I ran so happily here'-then I walked throught the door;-
Music and fans there, and nothing more.

Haiku by WHO?

living life,
quietly in the distance,
beautiful and lovely

La Musica

la musica,
good,
but bad,
country,
Carrie Underwood,
is good,
no one else,
every other,
country singer,
is bad,
her songs are,
awesome,
they touch my heart,
they are meaningful,
this is,
la musica

Secerts123 SMS1

Summer Haiku

Summer
Playing in the sun
Summer is so hot and fun
Until school opens
Bball21 SMS1

Music

Music
Rap?
It’s ok
Rhyming sounds good
Pop
Ok
It’s not that great
Oldies
Terrible
People playing banjos
Country
NO
No rock so boring
Rock
Yea
Electric guitars all the way!
Music is awesome!!! :Bball21 SMS1

Blue

Blue is calm and quite,
The clear sky
Small fish and,
starfish in the
Majestic water
Swimming about
Peacefully floating,
And darting around

Continue reading "Blue" »

green

redsoxfan5

The grass is a dark green
but when it is covered for a long time
it turns brown, and doesn't look good.

Apples are green,
and when they rot
and turn brown
you can't eat them.

A lot of nature is green,
and without nature to give us oxygen
we could not live.

We depend on the green,
we need green to live.

O Team! My Team!

O team! my team! our game is nearly over
The ball went in the net, the pride they owned, we won,
The bells are ringing, the fans cheering, we never let them down
We fought our hardest, used our best skills, and came out with more heart
But O win! win! win!
O the gallons of dropping sweat
Where on the side line we build our corage up,
To go on the field and kill

O team! my team! pack up your bags, were heading home
With more than just a win to show for,
We have our hearts, our corage and our strength as well
For the villians are dopping down
Hailing at our, of victory

MMFC24 SMS1

Music Poem

redsoxfan5

Rap? Eminem
Great
Word patterns are cool
Pop?
Okay
I kind of like it
Hip Hop?
The best there is
I like the beats
Country?
Horrible
I can never get in to the music
Alternative ?
Good
Guitar is cool

Music is cool!

Music, Music

Music, Music
Adidas

Music,
Music,
from my head,
to my knees,
Music,
Music,
everywhere.

Music,
Rock and Roll,
to
Hip-Hop,
Country,
to
R&B,
Music,
Music.

Music, Music,
Rock and Roll,
AC/DC?
Of course,
Hip-Hop,
yeah, why not,
Country,
Boring,
R&B,
BB King,
okay.

Music,
Music,
Everywhere.

Music Is Life

Hip hop? Justin Timberlake
"My Love"
Rap? Ya!
Country? Kenny Chesney
"That's the good stuff"
Heavy Metal?
Ew, doesn't fit my style
Soul? Powerful
Sometimes
Rythm and Blues
Too slow
Elvis, not at all
What about rock and roll?
Don't like
Music, my life, what I live for

MMFC24 SMS1

music is cool

Rap?
The bass is bumpin'
words are rhymin'.
Heavy metal?
Screaming and yelling,
not my type.
Country?
Good lyrics,
sometimes a little too rodeo.
Classical -
old people music,
good for naps,
but other than that,
i'll stick with the raps!

n1ii3k sms1

A day for you

Happy Mother’s Day

Happy mother’s day to you
I love you oh so very much
you always have time for me
Wherever we are, you’re always true

I love you oh so very much
The more we fight, the more we laugh
Wherever we are you’re always true
These are the times i love with you

The more we fight, the more we laugh
Even when we may be busy
These are the times I love with you
I know a mom that is the best

Happy Mother’s Day to you
Even when we may be busy
I know a mom that is the best
You always have time for me

MMFC24 SMS1

Haiku

The bright sun shinning
In the never-ending sky
It's a good day.

n1ii3k sms1