TELEPHONE POEM
8 Ever hear those advertisements
6 on the radio where
8 someone offers to tell you how
9 they made millions, for a price? Well, that
1 is
3 how they made
2 millions.
--by Michael B.
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8 Ever hear those advertisements
6 on the radio where
8 someone offers to tell you how
9 they made millions, for a price? Well, that
1 is
3 how they made
2 millions.
--by Michael B.
Comments
Nice Poem I love it especially your word and the way you formated it. Please tell me that, that is not your actual phone number please?
Posted by: Sheila S. | April 20, 2006 06:08 PM
I really like the formatting of this poem.
Posted by: Christian G. | April 24, 2006 09:26 AM
That was an interesting poem. I didn't get your format though. It was fine though.
FWMS
Posted by: Sarah C. | April 24, 2006 09:39 AM
Great poem good choice of topic telephones!
Posted by: Ashley L (FWMS) | April 24, 2006 09:40 AM
I really like how you used the numbers of the phone in a poem. The last 2 sentences where the best of the poem. KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
Posted by: Aaron M | April 24, 2006 09:46 AM
Your poem is very confusing it would be better if you used more metaphors. I think you should show us how they made millions.
Posted by: Fabio | April 24, 2006 11:16 AM
Intresting poem. I like the phone idea. It really got my attention. GOOD JOB!!
Posted by: Alex | April 28, 2006 09:41 AM
whoa that really made a good point across and its compltely true, just make it a bit longer but otherwise great poem
Posted by: Chandler L.(bonner) | May 4, 2006 11:52 AM
hey this is a alright poem i dont really get it but i know if i did get it i would really like it the thing i dont get is why you put the numbers in it
Posted by: Tanya H | May 4, 2006 12:23 PM
Hey that was a really good poem. I am not sure if you are trying to be serious or not though?? So you might want to make it longer. So have your phone number like 999-8678 or something so it could be long. Your star is it made me laugh! Good job and keep on writing poems
Posted by: Conner L (Bonner) | May 7, 2006 04:55 PM
hey, great poem. it was sort of confusing at first but then it picked up. for next time you should explain how they made millions. great job and keep up the good work.
Posted by: Nick W (bonner) | May 9, 2006 03:55 PM
This poem is so creative and funny that I laughed out loud!! Good Job.
Posted by: Hi Jo (Bonner) | May 9, 2006 08:52 PM
I really like the way your poem is laied out. Ive never seen that telphone poem. You should keep doing different poems
Posted by: Dayne | May 16, 2006 03:55 PM
I love this poem. At first I didn't understand it and then I realized what you meant. That is so cool! Great poem
Posted by: Kailyn | May 30, 2006 12:58 PM